Saturday, January 16, 2010

Chosen Chapter 1 Part 1

Part of me can't believe I'm posting this. It's still unedited. But I'm posting it anyway so the readers of There's Always Room For One More can get a feel for where I'm going with this book and see where I've disappeared to. The two characters, Emma and Will, are rough and their language and behavior supports that. So word to the wise, this is not like There's Always Room For One More with it's usual G rating. This is definitely PG-13.

I'm still early in the writing process of this book which means this chapter is subject to change, so bear that in mind.
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This sneak peek has already been pulled.
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6 comments:

  1. It was great! I wanted to keep reading. Why is she running? I must know.

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  2. Ohhhhh very good! I love it. Going to read chapter two right now!

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  4. Great beginning and gets everyone ready to read more. I'm like Tricia, I want to know why she's running.

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  5. I love that it starts in the middle of the chase.... and the changing perspective so we don't think Will is a psycho for jumping in the car like that. The line about "protect and serve fitting more than Always Faithful" was genius, don't change it! I can't wait to read more.

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  6. If I don't know anything about someone's WIP, it's usually hard for me to read something that long and stick with it. Yours kept my interest and it was a quick fun read. Good job. :)

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